Session Notes

Agenda

Debrief

• It was exciting to start with a clear scene — the beginning of a book!
• Too much of Arik, not enough of Lupo

Does this even work?

• Just keep going with writing, hold off on editing

Planning

• Maybe make the first scene in the past.
• Summarize the suffering
• 3rd person limited
• Explore the depression period
• As a flashback or in real time?
• Next Scene:
• Wake up in the dark
• There’s no light in his life
• It’s bad